Struggle For Dominance WIP

This is the beginnings of a project that I came up with to draw for my boyfriend... (Stupid brain betrayed me!) Okay, first I need to say the following. These two are not my characters. They are however my boyfriends, so please ask me before using them.

Next, I need to explain a bit. We have a really weird Exalted roleplaying world (as in it has more than the books-it's got novas from Aberrant in it, and others). So, this is a kitsune nova. There are two images because she went on this "inner journey" sort of thing, where she awakened Po recently giving it it's own sentience and power. (The darker nature of her soul). This character was very unprepared for it. So, she couldn't deal with it appropriately.

The left is her Po, the right is her. This is a project for me for several reasons, the first being that it involves elements that I'm not terribly comfortable with-legs, hands, lips.
As it were, here's the description for what it will look like after splicing it together, coloring and redrawing several hundred times:

Paths is the base picture of this beautiful anthro-fox girl terrified. Wearing a shirt that says "Better than Ebon" With beautiful orange and white fur that is very soft looking almost a feathery tone quality, soft colors despite her often crazy personality. Her red hair a bit up as if she's in the midst of movement-startled or perhaps terrified. The expression on her face is one of terror, eyes wide and watering. Her mouth in a "no," expression and her eyebrows up and a bit clenched towards one another. Her hands are up and away in a "look, see I'm defenseless sort of way" both trying to keep something back and to show that there is no reason to hurt her. Her legs are close together in a childlike attempt to protect her innocence and keep her demon at bay. Her tails downward and mostly close to her body. She wears her red coat with arms through the sleeves and short tight shorts.

Her Po on the other hand has larger breasts and an evil sort of come-hither look upon her face, black fur that is equal parts soft, sensual and ragged looking. Her tails swish wildly about, one hand is out reaching towards someone-not beckoning but like she's pulling palm faced down, pinky and ring finger bent while the other three fingers are stretched out the most. She wears no clothes but has white-electricity that writes words above her massive well-rounded bosom that says "Better than Paths." Her hips are a bit larger and her legs are together, with a little bit of wetness between them as if she's holding something inside her as opposed to trying to keep something out. Her other hand rests on her stomach very close to her crotch. Her mouth is slightly open showing a little bit of those vulpine canines with shiny golden lipstick that looks like liquid gold. A bit of electricity crackling around the area in red, and a red lightning heart just above the hand that's upon her stomach.

These two pictures meshed together a jagged slice revealing one half of her Po's face. Another slice revealing a little of the top of her Po's shoulder and her breast with the name "Paths" written on it covering the name "Ebon." A jagged slice that curves from stomach to part of her crotch and jagged slices revealing part of her tails here and there. As if the Po is ripping her way through the paper to be in the forefront.

Very dark and sensual. (Dark as in creepy/scary). Draw a partial background with bits of faint color here and there. The outline of part of a tank, the large tree of Auto-trigger, some buildings however the closest thing should be the tank and it should be fairly distant, footsteps walking away from it as if struggling to where Paths and her Po are now. Mostly outlined background kind of like those paintings where they only have a touch of color at the line. As if the main focus is Paths and her Po-because that is what it is.

And just a reminder, please ask permission before use!! Oh, and Ebon (as in Ebon Dragon from Exalted [a primordial that is trapped in Malfeas).